There are occasions where I wish to swear on here in a good way.......OOOOOOMMMMMMGGGGGGG Nananana.......as soon as I saw the title I knew that this was going to be awesome...im kinda....nifbbjdjndbduduhdbdjddsbdofoorusys....at the moment....you write with such emotion and ...blaaahhh omg this is good.....your word choice and tone is perfect and the poem flows like silk...ugh...I FREAKIN LOVE THIS AND I WANT TO NOMINATE !!

Saved to favs....jshddkdndddbsjdjnEPICsnsjjsjisYOU ROCK\m/

Can't......stay.........away.........:)

Granted I won't say it the way Rings of poetry did, this is a wonderful piece and I love the way you poured not only your heart but also every ounce of your soul. The flow is beyond wonderful and the style is quite unique. This is a very phenomenally penned piece.

Wonderfully Done!!!

Im creeping about around this piece ...again....awesomnesstastical!

Like running in the park on a summer day. It is frolicsome and beautifully imaged. The end couplet made me stop - this poem is true romantic love of the Don Quixote type: "pure and chaste from afar" as you are dreaming that impossible dream.

Adorable piece...:)

Congratulations on the win!!! A very well deserved win I must add :) :) :)

"Breathing you in, like a summer day
like a sweet odor stuck everywhere"

^^ Wow I love the similes here... such a beautifully painted picture.

"Falling and desolving in your cup;
laughing like sipping was by choice"

^^ LOOVED this!! I love the idea of falling and dissolving in a cup, and I like the sarcasm about how it wasn't a choice... it made me think of falling in love and how that's never by choice...

"leaving insomnia in the years behind,
sleeping deeply to the hums of your voice"

^^ I love the idea of sleeping not only better but also deeply, especially from "the hums of your voice"

"Perhaps,
I can rewrite you ceaselessly, from title to toes."

^^ Beautiful!!! Love the line "from titles to toes" and it truly as the perfect title to this poem!

This poem really made me feel good and reminded me of how lovely it is to feel inspired to write a poem for someone, almost continuously, from how beautiful the situation could be. Reallly enjoyed this poem <3 well done sweetie!

Congrats!!!

I've said it once Nana and i'll say it again.......awesomnesstastical!!!

:))

Aww... loved it! Great poem, wonderful flow and lovely words!

Congrats! :) You deserved it!

Love this!Congrats!

To write a poem about someone from title to toes! Now that is always and forever printed on paper and in your thoughts. Liked the read...Congrats on the win!!

Great!! Thanks for sharing...it spoke whats in my heart currently...wonderful !

Sometimes I wish I could live inside another poet's mind. It's awesome seeing the ideas one can come up with, and wish you could make it your own. Title to toes just seemed so unique to me. A phrase I've never heard of before, and your rhyming is as effortless as I remember. Such a sweet loving poem about someone. Loved every bit of this.

I want to write more poetry,
more of you, of words that ryhme

walking yet running back and forth
wandering- travelling back in time.

Congrats on this win, I am happy this won, The rhyming is great and the way you take us on a journey is inspiring. There is a strong meaning here to start out with, first you want to see this person again, perhaps a person from your past? I am thinking that because travelling back in time, and the poetry metaphor is great, it seems like this person is unique or beautiful in their own way like a poem.

Breathing you in, like a summer day
like a sweet odor stuck everywhere

in my gardens of your crystal eyes,
on my skin, on every lock of my hair.

^ When you are close with someone you know every inch of their live and you can smell something and that will remind you of them. Everything you smell reminds you of them it seems, or that is how I read into it. You look into their eyes and see their soul. and it just makes you love them even more.

Falling and desolving in your cup;
laughing like sipping was by choice

leaving insomnia in the years behind,
sleeping deeply to the hums of your voice

^ wow, this stanza tells me that you fell deep in love with them or that's again how I read into it. Before you met them, you couldn't sleep much, but again it takes that one person to comfort you in a way that all the pain and hurt goes away :).

Perchance,
I can keep you far, yet keep you close

Perhaps,
I can rewrite you ceaselessly, from title to toes.

^ This is where the poem gets to me, what a stunning ending you have written well. No matter where they are you will keep them close. and each poem/story can be rewritten anytime and that line tells me that people can change for the better if they tried. great write hon 5/5