I thought you're done. I thought I have waited enough. But, look, after I've seen you just for an hour here I am again writing another poetry.

I highly recommend not putting back stories on pieces. Its not always been reviewed well here.

Stars Will Fall

I highly recommend not putting the title of it in the poem. It has its own place for titles.

Stars in the dark sky
Together with them I cry
A year has gone by
And hopes had already fly

The rhyming was very off kilter here. I understand the visual you were portraying but the line and hopes had already fly makes no sense. punctuation would enhance this piece.

Overall very sad compared to part one. Well written.