A rather different poem,this one.The way you depict life it's just something novel,not that we don't know this but to present it in this manner is something new!!Great job though!

Well written. I like the style in which it is written and framed.

This is an elegant piece of work. Although, life can be so different for us all we have similarities to if we look closely. I hope that makes sense.

The words and beat are a breath of fresh air.

Em

Life ..... Question that not answered yet, many poet has written pages on it!

Still Life .... That Question is not answered !!

Wonderful try Pratap ! I love the way you pen down...