by Michael D Nalley Dec 28, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I want to lie with you to tell you the truth |
I would say Dylanesque for your use of cliches in a newly original manner. On the other hand, the style really is pure Nalley and better in that way. The tongue in cheek delivery is perfect. |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow, I enjoyed this. Normally I do not like unpunctuated poems but for some reason, your poetry does not seem to bother me. I think it might be the way you lay it out, because without the punctuation it is still easy to read, and it also still makes sense. |