Wow, I enjoyed this. Normally I do not like unpunctuated poems but for some reason, your poetry does not seem to bother me. I think it might be the way you lay it out, because without the punctuation it is still easy to read, and it also still makes sense.

Beautiful write.

I would say Dylanesque for your use of cliches in a newly original manner. On the other hand, the style really is pure Nalley and better in that way. The tongue in cheek delivery is perfect.