by konpreah Dec 28, 2014
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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Do not listen to the moon, child |
by BlueJay
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I really enjoy the way you penned this piece. My only true critique is the capitalization of every single line it distracts the reader and puts emphasis in places it doesn't really fit - especially in a piece as lengthy as this. Very well penned and awesome us of word choice/imagery! Very well done! |
by konpreah
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Thanks for the good word. |
by Maple Tree
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Oh mercy I'm speechless! Oh I love this! I do apologize for this short comment, but I'm truley speechless! Wow! |
by konpreah
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Enough said. Thanks again. |