Very fantastic poem. Filled with grief and loving emotions. The last smile that you gave would definitely be the best thing to see before dying. It's not easy to smile while you are watching your close people dying because you are in a crying state. But you have executed this write very well. Nicely done.

Very fantastic poem. Filled with grief and loving emotions. The last smile that you gave would definitely be the best thing to see before dying. It's not easy to smile while you are watching your close people dying because you are in a crying state. But you have executed this write very well. Nicely done.