So here I am at work, taking a sneaky peaky at some writes and I come across this.....OMG....if I thought it would help id ban you from love poetry....this wrecked me....

"I'm not a writer that flows with a pen like you,
Rhyming words from the heart, for the reader to view.
My metaphors scatter in coma's mixed in nature,
Conveying beauty, something far greater."

UUUGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

The fact that I know you love to write in metaphors and Jim loves rhyming makes this piece so much more than the words (which of course are flawless) ...if you haven't guessed it...... I LOVE this poem so much.....thanks for killing me so early in the day :P

Can't......Stay........Away......ARRGGGHHHH!!!

Damn I wish I could nominate :/

Awwww thank you Ben.... Hugs you

Such a purely beautiful write with more meaning than I can comprehend... this love you have is amazing and I'm so happy you have each other in this life. I especially liked how you said marriage is more than a union of two, it's that but more powerful... what gives you both strength each day.

Small, small note: "Ive" should have an apostrophe :P

Lovely love poem!

Such a purely beautiful write with more meaning than I can comprehend... this love you have is amazing and I'm so happy you have each other in this life. I especially liked how you said marriage is more than a union of two, it's that but more powerful... what gives you both strength each day.

Small, small note: "Ive" should have an apostrophe :P

Lovely love poem!

This is beautiful, I do really love your poems when you do just write from your heart, they are truly touching and so so beautiful.

I like the rhyming in this one, and also love your little hint towards the fact that you usually do not write in rhyme like J does lol.
But when you do, you always pull it off.

Another thing I like about this poem is how you refuse to pick just one or two moments from your 4 years together, but instead you express that every single second you have been with him is worth writing about. I find this really beautiful and shows how precious your relationship is.

Beautiful tone throughout and I like the personal dedication at the end by mentioning his name and how your love will last forever and never end - this is true love, and one I can relate to. Your love poems always hit me hard!!

Damn... you smell

Hugs you saffie,
Love cheese ball lol

Beautiful poem.