FINALLY YOU CAME UP WIH A PIECE ABOUT THE BABY.

Sorry.

BUT I'M SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS!!!!!!

Great write. I found it mysterious and intriguing, and wondering what is the back story on this poem. a very mature poem ya gots here. Love it!

Stardust, the substance of our bodies - a lovely image full of mystery and wonder.

How did i miss this???

omg <3

I just can't get over this beauty

Hello,

How wonderful is this?

The sweet sentimental way you have written this speaks volumes. The Ocean simile is apt, as is the intimate stranger.

Birth is miraculous and marvelous. I remember listening to the liquid gurgling sounds, straining my ear to hear my then unborn son. Little did I know my crown was being inspected! lol

As I have said this is sweet and beautiful. I hope your baby is just as sweet, beautiful and healthy.

((hugs))

Michael

This really is a beautifully crafted and well written piece that had me smiling by the end. Well done and all the very best,
Ben

This is an amazing write! totally knocked it out the park!

I love the whole piece but that last stanza is genius.

Epic Write

Ben