When Time Stood Still

by PineappleKing   Dec 31, 2014


My ears were greeted by the sound of an angel singing.
That's when I knew the sound of pure bliss and serenity.
"This is it" I thought as my mind wondered through the possibilities.
My mind raced as I tried to comprehend my passing.
I was brought back to my senses by the sounds of a keyboard thundering with embarrassment.
I saw you typing away with a face of a strawberry.
That's when I realized it wasn't angels I heard singing.
It was you.
from that point on I knew angels were jealous of you and your voice.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Another beautiful write, you have a good gift in writing simple poems, without having to word them too much and yet holding that reader's attention.

    You also leave them wanting more, that is what I get from your writes, like you give just enough to make the poem good enough, but then leave us hanging for some more, more of the story or more of the same tone.

    It is beautifully worded and I do love your title.

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is a very sweet write with a lovely dedication. I love the way you write about this person being an angel for their voice and taking such a cliche idea to a new or maybe just a more clearly personal extreme. I really like the word choice, the title is great. I love the way your heart and voice are poured into these words. As usual I personally think there needs to be a little more definitive format, but otherwise it's excellent.

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