by BlueJay
This is a very sweet write with a lovely dedication. I love the way you write about this person being an angel for their voice and taking such a cliche idea to a new or maybe just a more clearly personal extreme. I really like the word choice, the title is great. I love the way your heart and voice are poured into these words. As usual I personally think there needs to be a little more definitive format, but otherwise it's excellent. |
by Baby Rainbow
Another beautiful write, you have a good gift in writing simple poems, without having to word them too much and yet holding that reader's attention. |