by Masked metaphor Dec 31, 2014
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
A year is almost complete... |
by Em
A very refreshing read. The opening stanza is very gripping and then the rest of the piece follows suit. Written well. |
I hope you get to truly express who you are in 2015 as you state within the bottom stanza. |
An excellent write with a perfect title 'a time for change' |
by C Cattaway
Very pretty; both the words, & the layout. Beautifully scribed, & described. Well done x |
by Beautiful Soul
I am so glad you came back strong with this poem, such a powerful piece that is so true for this time of year. I love how you broke down each emotion and gave them a voice so to speak. It is interesting that we are full of regrets each time of year and we shed tears for it, but we also have memories that impact us whether they be good or bad. We can definitely push ourselves out of our comfort zone if we tried and each year people say they will but fall back into that zone. I love this for it's great wordplay and message, each person can relate to this, but also interpret it in their own way. |