Comments : Love's Disappearing Touch

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This poem holds a lot of sadness within and does an excellent job in showing why you are sad and have that fear. This person frightens you to no extent. But you are scared of the promises he might keep and everything you love would disappear from your life. Teddy bears seemed to be your safety, so that tells me that you are a younger child here that experienced this. Which is so sad, idk how people can be so cruel like that. You wanted to believe that this person was lying to you, but as you saw with your very own eyes they were not and now you hold the memories within yourself. But it is difficult to believe in anything anymore be a of this one person. I find it sad how one person can make or break us, but it is true. 5/5