Oh my goodness I love this. Nominated uttam.
This was so different.
I first thought you were taking about someone passing away on 31 Dec and that won't be able to see 2015 but then I realized you are taking about the year 2014 which is passing away.
Wonderful.
This poem was really good. I'm putting it in my favorite too ^_^

Fantastic idea for a poem, really different approach to the end of the year poetry I have read before.

Well penned my friend, very well penned.

2014' Gone Forever'
Wonderful write to bid bye to 2014

On wow..
Congratulations uttam. :-)

You have A new year gift. :-P

What a heart felt way to bid the year 2014 goodbye! You have turned the year into a living being who has provided each one of us with lessons, memories and moments-some good and some bad. Nicely penned.

Congrats on the win!

Congrats on the win:)

I like your start and despite the random length of this verse , it still can read fluently making the reader more excited to see how it ends.

Some unnecessary words could be omitted without losing any thing, check this:
~Your body is frail and sketched with wrinkles,
and you are suffocatingly
--------> Your body is frail, sketched with wrinkles,
you are suffocatingly
counting your last breaths today,

You used interesting vocabularies which was very refreshing and enriched the piece so much.
I like the closure as well, very well description for 2014.

Happy new year and congrats.
Write on~

The creativity of this piece caught my attention after I read it the first time. The way it leads you into a false start of thinking the poem is about a person, but the twist comes when you realise it is about the last year passing by. I thought the poem was well constructed. A dedication to saying goodbye to 2014!