Solace in need

by Meme   Jan 2, 2015


Another battle,
can I silence the prattle?
In a haze of grey there
are too many voices.

Another crack,
back the same track?
I never missed walking
in your shadowy roads.

Another scar,
have I gone too far?
Pealing off your presence
is not an easy thing to do.

Another fall,
I missed the last call?
I hope am not far strayed
from finding the silver lining.

My dear friend,
will it all come to an end?
I am too weak on my own
to stand under stormy clouds.

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© Copyright 2015 by: gIrL
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  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is elegant and the message mixes with a somber rythem... I love it!

    The poem is highlighted in a great format and pattern, not happy with the sadness your heart is feeling. Hugs you!

  • 9 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Your issue is with love lost, but there is an underlying assumption that you should develop: the inner strength you have developed as a result.

    Also, I suggest changing "mark" to "crack" to maintain the rhyme scheme and keep the meaning of the stanza.

    • 9 years ago

      by Meme

      Will do that!
      Thanks a lot Larry <3

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