A rather novel expression of emotions I must say, like yes love does make us kinda crazy but who knew that this craziness can be captured and be formed into something so beautiful!! Great job.

Whoa - that is ... I'm actually having a hard time figuring out what to say even though I know what I want to say. This is talent. Creative and beautifully written. I really love that ending too! It's so adorable

"Who metamorphosis your emotions into an active volcano
Leading the fire to your face that ejects the flames
And pours it on everyone but him
And here you turn into ashes
Killed by what we call love."