Losing a pet is hard. Mojo's world was you and your family. Your write is powerful, sorrowful, and beautiful. Your flow was great. I hope all goes well. 5/5 |
by Wicked Ways
I'm sorry for your loss |
This poem flowed throughout the poem it was very nice to read, it never makes it better to hear someone tell me "I'm sorry for your loss" so I'll tell you like you wrote in your poem, you'll find your companion in heaven one day. There's nothing wrong with the poem it's flawless, and it's a great tribute to a fallen pet, that maybe it will take a while to get over but it's a very good memory after the pain fades away, trust me all pets are. Great job on the imagery, the emotions, and the way you pulled the reader to keep on reading on, while adding beauty to it, even while it breaks your heart. 5/5 |
Sorry for the lost; you feelings are well expressed and it's touching. |
by Sunshine
Whatever he,she,it is, losing something so dear for us is the hardest thing we can deal with. I dont think there is anything that makes us feel as helpless and powerless as much as loss. |
I can see your soul in the words... so expressive and shows the pain when those we love move on. Those we love walk on two and sometimes four legs. Love is love |
I can see your soul in the words... so expressive and shows the pain when those we love move on. Those we love walk on two and sometimes four legs. Love is love |