Comments : Butterfly Love

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Very pretty Dante!

    Butterflies are beautiful and inspirational when you think about it...

    Truly a lovely piece!

    • 9 years ago

      by James Garrett

      Oh thank u 4 liking Butterfly Love. Ithe felt good and the words flowed freely from my mind. I hope to get good enough to contact a publishing company to submit a book of my poetry. Does anyone have any luck ato this or do u have to die first. LoJames Garrett

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I like the read. Everything sounded smooth to me until I reached the last couplet. Other than that I could see those butterflies. I felt as I was in there.

    • 9 years ago

      by James Garrett

      Everlasting,
      I agree with u. I ended the piece differently so that it didn't ruin the poem.
      thank u,
      Dante