Rachel, You Play, Rapture, Upon, My Soul... (A Sonnet)

This is a Poem/Sonnet I composes per the parameters and guideline of "Rhyme Scheme, Rhythm, & Metering Challenge (Exercise)" {http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=144028};

Rachel, You Play, Rapture, Upon, My Soul... (A Sonnet)

Rachel. You Play, Rapture, Upon, My Soul.
Exhilarated, I'm Left, Ever So,
Transfixed, By The Ecstasy You Bestow.
Enchanted, You Leave Me, At Your Control.

Your Rhapsody, Beckons Me, Every Fourth.
Your Siren Song, Calls Me, Toward, Your Shore,
In Affinity, I'm Left, Wanting, More.
To You, I'm Drawn, Like A Compass, To North.

Venus, Aphrodite, Both, To You, Fall.
Utterly Spellbound, You Leave, One And All.
Your Charms, Your Magic, Irresistible.

You Leave Me, Enamored, With Such Ardor,
Besot, With Fancy, Every Corridor.
Your Heaven, Splendor, Unequivocal...

Rhyme Scheme: ABBA CDDC EEF GGF
Meter: Pentameter
Rhythm: Mixed

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love