Comments : Time Apart

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    :)))

    Awesome hearfelt write here!

    I really like the tone of the whole piece and the mini rhyme at the end was a really nice touch!

    Great as ever :P

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is so sweet and touching. The sentiments runs deep and is felt deeply...touching write!

  • 9 years ago

    by ron parrish

    A beautiful poem of love