by Maple Tree Jan 7, 2015
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I'm frozen tear drops |
by Brookie
The fact that they are frozen brings up a lot of questions whether its a good or a bad thing (tear drops are generally seen as bad) but the way this is set up it could easily be argued that the frozen tear drops are a thing of beauty. This is interesting because You are the object of beauty and you go into more detail by explaining that you are "Crystalized love messages" which to me makes me feel as though you yourself see again beauty in something, though I am unsure of what in this specific poem. For me it raises the question what love messages, though i think i understand it. |
by GB
Classy and beautifully joined. Interesting read indeed. |
by Sunshine
AWWW..I love the fact that they are frozen! it strikes the heart much more than, if they were just falling tear drops. This actually makes me somehow relate to some of your other recent poems; being dominated and stuck a bit at some level by certain things that means best to us. |