I know you will be here always
And you will be missed
Memories we will carry
In our hearts and breast
- The only small part I didn't like about this poem was the word "breast" in this stanza, for me it just doesn't fit. I think it would sound better if you chose another word for it instead, but that is just my opinion.
The rest of the poem I liked, especially in the opening stanza. I hope you pick a title for this write.