I liked this poem although, I would've liked more commas within the poem and some periods would've made a difference, like a friend of mine once told me (though it stung like hell) punctuation does help a poem, to make it more grand. I loved the story that was the poem, the flow didn't waver throughout the poem, and finally you could see and feel while reading the poem and that's truly great. Great job and have a lovely day. 5/5

-Mori

Wow, very powerful and brutally honest. A heartbreaking account of what is all too real. Well written.

That's such an honest poem.
You've shared your emotions and let it all out with these verses and that's not easy when it comes to this subject and that age.

I thought it was a very sad poem, beautiful title, the ending was really unexpected and helplessly sad.

thanks for sharing

Such a sad, sad poem especially as it happens to innocent children.

Em