by Sunshine Jan 8, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Shall I shred my aches |
by Ben Pickard
As Ben says, this is wonderful poetry, Rania. I too read it a few times. I am always impressed by how tightly you control your pieces. They always read as if you have complete mastery over the words. You never lose focus and each word counts. |
by Baby Rainbow
Such a deep poem, and such contrast between comfort and pain. The title is really powerful and I like how you have merged that into the poem, and repeated it in the end, nicely done to leave that strong impact and reinforce the message. |
by Sunshine
:) |
by Naughtymouse
I have read this so many times....and still i cant comment :/ |