Daaaaaaammmmmmmmmmn.
What can I tell you about any of your poems anymore without having to repeat myself. Really

please break down your fifth line anyway haha, it's lengthy unlike the whole poem.

okay back to this, yes I've been taken in a journey in a voyage, on a pilgrimage and then, God was behind, and I was taken on a trip.

I loved your personal tone, I loved the implication of 1st person, and the mind-play; you indeed had me as reader all caught up and :high-jacked.

I am very fond of this writing, although different by content from the rest of your poems but literary wise it was equally good. You have many ideas and thoughts yet you DO have your own style. I think you're very original and I love your work.

Hahah thank you Ziad! That's kind of you