Do you realize what you just did? You posted this excerpt, but now I want to read it all.

Did you already decide on a title? I'm just curious because although I think that this entries title works for this part, I think it does not need to be that straightforward as the piece speaks for itself. To be honest I did not pay attention to the title at first, I mainly saw that it was something written by you, so I checked it. The thing is that this touched me, I felt sorry for the protagonist and wished I could do something. The way you portray his feelings is subtle and does not feel overdone. There is nothing worse than seeing a human being suffer from self doubt. Thanks for making me so curious ha.