I like this piece, it is cute and well written. In case you haven't noticed I'm an huge fan of format and you has no form here lol but very well penned otherwise. The word choice is wonderful and you definitely captured your scene very very well.

This is cute - explaining the adorable little butterflies we get because of whomever we're crushing on and then finally doing something about our feelings! :3
Except it doesn't explain what those OTHER two people were doing there in that same confined little small space!? -Haha-
It's curious, I'll give you that :P