World Peace

Brilliant.

Hello Alka

This is a sentiment I wholeheartedly agree with; wouldn't it be nice if everyone else did too?

Well done and all the best,

Ben

Love is what matters. Thank you for this poem Alka.

Good message for world peace. There is a soothing
calm effect in this write which makes it nice to read.
It will be even more nicer with some punctuation so
that it will sound even better.

For example:

Let us
Arise!

^^At first I thought a coma would be fine but
with an exclamation mark added it will give strength
to the voice/message.

Take action for world peace,

^^I feel this line stands out on its own with the intending message.

Believe in the
Inter connected-ness of life,

Mystic bond of eternity...

^^Here too I feel there is a spiritual linking
which you want to get across to the readers so
that is why I felt the dots will work

Sharing the same life span
On this planet,
Spreading love to all
We meet.

So it will be like this:

Let us
Arise!

Take action for world peace.

Believe in the
inter-connected-ness of life,

Mystic bond of eternity...

Sharing the same life span
on this planet,
Spreading love to all
We meet.

All in all I like the write and I hope you don't mind me pointing out the changes. Keep penning and sorry for the delayed comment!