Good message for world peace. There is a soothing
calm effect in this write which makes it nice to read.
It will be even more nicer with some punctuation so
that it will sound even better.

For example:

Let us
Arise!

^^At first I thought a coma would be fine but
with an exclamation mark added it will give strength
to the voice/message.

Take action for world peace,

^^I feel this line stands out on its own with the intending message.

Believe in the
Inter connected-ness of life,

Mystic bond of eternity...

^^Here too I feel there is a spiritual linking
which you want to get across to the readers so
that is why I felt the dots will work

Sharing the same life span
On this planet,
Spreading love to all
We meet.

So it will be like this:

Let us
Arise!

Take action for world peace.

Believe in the
inter-connected-ness of life,

Mystic bond of eternity...

Sharing the same life span
on this planet,
Spreading love to all
We meet.

All in all I like the write and I hope you don't mind me pointing out the changes. Keep penning and sorry for the delayed comment!

Love is what matters. Thank you for this poem Alka.

Hello Alka

This is a sentiment I wholeheartedly agree with; wouldn't it be nice if everyone else did too?

Well done and all the best,

Ben

Brilliant.