Comments : Random encounter - Practice exercise

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh wowww... Remind me again why I love your poems so much.Well remind me that you haven't cast some weird spell on me and that I genuinely love this poem. ;)

    This poem was really beautiful to read.You know, there is this really different writing style you've got I feel which just leaves me awestruck.
    I just love the way you rhyme. But truthfully I found this poem funny so why don't you put it in the funny poems category.

    And these lines, oh lol....i loved them.

    "nevermind,
    what's up crew?!
    Did anyone lost a screw?
    take a look around you,
    the sky is blue."

    ha ha...you do do a wonderful work with your words. :)