by ah satan 666 Jan 15, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
{ someone turn the volume down } |
by Ben Pickard
This was very cleverly written with a brilliant end. |
by Baby Rainbow
For anyone who has ever suffered with headaches, or migraines, they will instantly feel themselves being understood within this poem! The author has cleverly created this feeling of the headache using such vivid metaphors, you can almost feel the thumping bangs of the pain. I like the creativity of the structure also, the use of the brackets, and the layout. It all came together well and I enjoyed the read. |
by BlueJay
Judging Comment |
by Beautiful Soul
Trying to describe an action is difficult for a lot of people, but it seems like it comes natural to you. I like this a lot, a lot of people beat me to the punch so I wont say a lot, but the imagery is great to describe what a headache feels like when it spreads around your head. Have to agree as well the ending was so well written and there is a lot of truth within it as well, you want the silence of night time to keep yourself calm and try to make this go away. nice write. 5/5 |
by Baby Rainbow
Ouch - you gave me a headache. |