You had me hooked at "collecting dust with rotting strings" - it made me shiver. This was beautifully written, hauntingly written. Thank you for finding words for such heartache and despair. I hope finding the words helped you heal just a little bit. |
by Em
I'm in tears!!! This hits me right in the gut and gave me goosebumps |
by Mandy
Oh thank you, Em! I wrote this one awhile ago but it's...probably my favorite writing I've ever done. <3 I appreciate you taking the time to read it! <3 |
by Ben Pickard
Powerful writing and very fluent. |
I don't know how I missed this little masterpiece. You had me gripped all the way through. The rhyming and flow were excellent as was the tale. Beautifully written and absolutely has to go on my favourites list. Milly x |
Fluent and very nice! :) this goes to my favorites |
by Mandy
Ty :D |