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Bless her <3

Saffie, wow this poem is powerful, so much power that one person can affect so many lives. One crash and one accident or bombing can affect so many lives. This is sadly the world we live in nowadays, and this world used to be so peaceful and bright, but killing is all that is heard about. I love the beginning of this poem for its introduction, but you did not use it as the main message of the poem. That comes later with your niece who asks you turn off the tv because in your and her heart know that this world is falling apart and she knows how dangerous the world is nowadays. I love this poem as a whole because of the title for one, it fits so damn well with the poem, and two, you did not put yourself as the main character but instead almost have like two different poems going on, but they are connected as one. 5/5