This is actually a much shorter read then it appears!! Maybe that's just cause you have the reader hooked, leaning on the edge of their seat ;)
But I think this was quite spooky o.o Ooooh Tooo Spookyy *Giggles* I liked how you literally had a movie reel playing in my head - it's cool and I like the times you set it in. Really gives it that cool, Jazzy Mysterious vibe! Can't wait for part 2 :)

Damn

u definitely told a story of a vengeful vixen
sounds like she has a right to be too :/

idk I just really liked this

you're a good writer keep it up

This poem was okay. Not your best by far. The story was average, and it was hard to follow at some parts. It didn't really suck me in like I thought it would for a long poem. The ending was meh to me. I thought it could have been a lot better. A ghost story is better written. See she cannot die and be alive so that tells me that she is a ghost that is haunting the person who killed her. I will give you this, the imagery is lovely because it does paint you a picture in the head. and it is definitely the right category for it. Some of the lines were choppy and needed to add words to make it flow more. Especially some of the middle stanzas at the beginning of the sentences. I didn't care for the title much either. I think you could have just called it "Vengeful".
Could be better in a lot of ways honestly.