This is a lovely poem Cassie. The love held by two people cannot easily be broken by anyone and it is sad when an ex gf comes back into the picture because it does make things difficult. But the emotions you wrote here are well and you are saying that you want to make their ex jealous of the relationship you have together so they won't have any ideas about going back to the person they broke up with. I love the language you have here too. You state that you love this person deeply and you are asking this person to be there for you because without them you are the shell of the girl you are, and a ghost of your former self. 5/5

This poem is lovely. When you love someone so much you are afraid that they will go. Even when they reasure you they wont. I believe its an insecurity that alot of people can relate to.

"Help me show her, together, love she'll never know."
This line made me smile. It shows just how much you love this person. This poem is so beautiful and its an amazing tribute.

Oh :/
this is the vulnerability that someone feels when the person they are with ex love comes around, huh
well I think you penned it honestly

"but her words keep on filling my mind and I'm lost,"

ofcourse it will rack your brain x_$ having an ex come back around always complicates feelins
. I don't know I guess connect with this on a level... kinda puts me in this poems point of view so well done

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Brilliant flow to this Cassie and powerfully written.

I totally agree with Ben - This is such a powerful write, wonderfully penned.