Oh Luce, this was beautiful! Will comment more in-depth later :] |
Beautifully penned Lucero !!!! |
by uttAm
Just woww for your unique and out of the box metaphors....and i liked the ending of your poem very much.:) |
by gumshuda
Agreed with everyone above*nodding* |
This poem is full elegance and it's totally on bible based. Very well written young girl. You have crafted the heart in a very different technic, I adore that. And also the message that you are giving through this write. |
So I knew there was a poem I said I'd come back for, it was nagging at me lol |