by Baby Rainbow Jan 20, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
His intrusive touch |
by Mayday
Silence falls upon the scene |
by Beautiful Soul
This one is sad extremely. I couldn't even imagine what you have been through and not feel pain like this. It seems here this is someone from your past and you are scared. Maybe this is when you were a child and you had a memory that you had to write out, and forget. but we don't really ever forget. and that why depression starts in on us. I do like the imagery of this piece though, it is dark and hard to imagine. but this is a great write as you let out your feelings and stayed the whole way through with emotion. 5/5 |