Inspirational Paradox.

by Poet on the Piano   Jan 20, 2015


Change
must first be
suggested
by the coward -

then the valiant
dreamer can
intertwine
reality
with the pulse
of a hundred
vacant
hearts.

-
Written 1/20/15 @ 1:10 PM

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  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Excellent-Nailed!

    I loved the metaphors so much I want them to be mine,
    very vivid and powerful.

    you started it of, with simple introduction, that yet held a factful message, and then you continued with your jealouslable :P word choice.

    It is true the coward does need to take a step into change first, I dont think there would be change if the coward did not.

    I loved the pulse of vacant hearts, you are giving them something, a pinch of hope, a wake up call. Whatever it may seem by each and his perspective, you simply nailed this piece.