Sprout.

by Poet on the Piano   Jan 21, 2015


May I be luminous in you? Dazzle
like sunflowers who mimicked love
when light called to snow and suddenly,
ray flowers blossomed from the wet soil.

Why do I feel sightless though I can
physically pinpoint where and how the
weather tempers with this earth? I want
to be your forecast, to sense without the
senses....

Can't you understand? Clarity is everything.

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Written 1/20/15 @ 8:16 PM
Freewrite while listening to the instrumental song: Luminous from "Perfect Sense" composed by Max Richter

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  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Wow! I think you should listen more often to these stuff then :) We have such a master piece here.
    I can already see your finger tips writing this piece.

    Your structure is very strong, and your phrases so coherent.
    Your May I...opening made this somehow HOT.
    Then how you reflect a sense of life and birth. Gave me a scene of ice into water into the roots into the birth of something new...just like seasons. Agh how beautiful is your stanza.

    And then! you take us somewhere else, I felt some current of strong love here, wanting to be somehow the dominant, the everything..

    to sense without the sense.

    lkjfsdznxfkjdhskjfdxhfkjdshf wonderfulllllllll.

    I was really fond if your ending line, about clarity, it had abit of strength, wit.

    Applause *

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