I'm very happy that you like it, and that it triggers such a powerful response. It's very rare for me to actually write honest poems where I just show things openly like this. I think that most of the people that have read some of my stuff before can tell the difference almost immediately though. There's nothing profound, no message, no concepts, no interpretations. Because all of us has those days sometimes, when the air feels like razor blades cutting your lungs everytime you breathe.