Pretty speechless over here because this is such a personal, heartfelt, piece. What I really liked was how you kept that theme of storm and then tying it with your tears as well... giving yourself to be able to shelter from what's to come. That sacrificial love and desire to be with this person when the hard moments come is something so priceless. |
The poetess is having some apprehensions: |
by Brookie
"Im a bucket full of nerves" |
by Baby Rainbow
I found Andrea's poem heart-wrenching to read this week, and yet so beautifully constructed. This really shows off her talent as an author who can show emotions using the tools of the environment around her, and the ink of her pen. The poem is very touching and I think goes to show of the bravery she holds for life's battles, and how she will be there through thick and thin for her loved ones, no matter how much it hurts. A true fighter's words. A fearless spirit when it comes to protecting others. |