Gave me goosbumps! I like the setting, imagery and how you ended it! Wonderful work!
8 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Andrea. The descriptive writing in this is wonderful - truly. As below, it gives you goose bumps reading.
"whispering cemetery" - that's wonderful: the idea of the dead creating a whispering graveyard.
"Midnight calls upon a sheltered shadows (shadow's?) misery"
^^^
The alliteration is sublime and the whole line rolls off the tongue wonderfully.
Great piece, Andrea - you imagination knows no bounds!