by Michael D Nalley Jan 25, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Is there a mat at your door |
by Sunshine
This is outstanding. I think I need you to change the genre from friendship to Misc, it wont allow me to nominate. |
I loved how it flowed throughout the poem but there was one little thing that bothered me and it was "sisters and brothers" maybe if you put the order backwards "brothers and sisters". I'm so humbled by this poem Michael, since I was behind the reason but this poem hit all the major points in my life dealing with my brother. Loved the title because it's symbolic in a way, for a welcome mat is the first thing you step on to enter your destination, so very clever in the title. Enjoyed this poem emensly have a nice day, and thank you again for making this poem! 5/5 |