Comments : Welcome Mat

  • 9 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    I loved how it flowed throughout the poem but there was one little thing that bothered me and it was "sisters and brothers" maybe if you put the order backwards "brothers and sisters". I'm so humbled by this poem Michael, since I was behind the reason but this poem hit all the major points in my life dealing with my brother. Loved the title because it's symbolic in a way, for a welcome mat is the first thing you step on to enter your destination, so very clever in the title. Enjoyed this poem emensly have a nice day, and thank you again for making this poem! 5/5

    -Mori

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is outstanding. I think I need you to change the genre from friendship to Misc, it wont allow me to nominate.

    I loved the flow and the depth. I read it few times to gather myself up with your cheif messages in this one. It's all thought-provoking, everywhere.

    You're amazing