Ohhh Get out! SCREAMS! with excitement!

This shook me... this is powerful!!

Remarkable and different than the poems I read so far from you, your title caught my attention as well.

~in the recesses
of my delusions-
^^That added a real spicy touch the first stanza, making it vague and enthusiastic.

The rest of the poem as well very neatly penned, see how exciting the writing about writing?! :)
Excellent piece.