This is :) sensational

I'm so impressed by this. (: It's so creative and well-written. You gave out some pretty intense imagery. I really like how you wrote this - really captures how powerful nature can be and I especially thought the finishing line was clever;

God's whisper harshly
"demon be gone", nature sighs,
exorcism dies.

Cool!
5/5

Interesting! You have used one of nature's season-winter to show the strength and chaos it can cause but in a "demonic" way. It felt like nature was a young life possessed by winter and God intervenes releasing nature from winter's cruel acts.

Very vivid and interestingly penned!