Loved the title 'an eyelash stuck in my eyes'
All can relate to the pain caused when an eyelash stucks in a eye.
Here the author is referring both the eyes .
The thoughts got clouded ,and could not make out the pain.

Love the simile of flowing tears to that of a soothing lullaby .

The author does not blame the eyelash for the pain caused .We certain times ignore the reality and live in a confused state of mind.We do not reflect on our state of mind:
You obfuscated my sight,
But it was'nt your fault........

Loved the last line as it is a realization,which let go cause of pain:
"Until you no longer are an eyelash stuck in my eyes ."

This reminds me of when your upset but you dont want anyone to know it. So you say you have something in your eye. So I read the poem in this context. I think its something we can all relate too. Some of us get more eyelashes in our eyes than others. Great write

This one is so so sad...i don't know why but reading it I sort of felt really really emotional...never really get emotional you know (yes i'm like a stone sometimes)...
This was so...so.., don't really know what to say..(i'm out off words)

But I Hope you don't really wanna cry and are not really sad because oh would that not hurry me to know my sweet Lucy is sad :( and I won't be there to wipe your tears like some younger Sister...

You have given the eyelash a character. One that comes into our sight and gives pain without realizing or even meaning it.

Reading this got me all sad and teary. There is a touch of tenderness and pain in this write...touching!