by Maple Tree Jan 28, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
As always, |
Your brevity here is memorable. Only suggestion would be to place a semi-colon or dash after "infect the very heart of me"? But the comma works too obviously, just suggested to switch it up. |
by Sunshine
What do we have here ?! Very nice Mayfairy; I can agree with every word and you wont be amazed I know. |