Love this piece, it's uplifting and full of life! I have to say though, my friend talked my and my mom's ear off the other night when it was probably below freezing on our country roads... and it was miserable haha. The converse tennis shoes line made me think of that as that was what I was wearing and they got so numb waiting for him to finish his story! |
by Naughtymouse
There are times Syrup when you kill me with your writing xx |
by Sunshine
I love this poem, I love the feeling it has given me while reading it, and I love the power I felt within your words. |
by Maple Tree
All fixed, thank you Nana, love you |
by Liz
My feet are always cold, so I can relate to this. Kidding. Lol. Well, only half kidding (they really are always cold. =P) |
by Kakera
Oh hun this is absolutely lovely! |
by uttAm
This is indeed a great poem....really loved it!! |