The heart code

by earlgreytea   Jan 30, 2015


If I could look through these hardwired eyes,
I know what I would see;
Command Prompt: Broken Mirrors softly bleeding mercury.
Once an error.. (Module 2)
as I begged spiders to weave
a blanket made of binary,
My IP on my sleeve.
At times the memories cache me..
I cant help but LOGIC OVERRIDE
</default; whispers on the darknet>
I wish you were by my side.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well written. Enjoyed this.

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    This piece leaves the audience laughing because it takes an up and coming field of study and work to a new level. IT takes a creative tole on the logic of the computer programming and mixing it with poetry. There is a wonderful use of voice and an overwhelming display of emotion as well. Great use of formatting as well.

    • 9 years ago

      by earlgreytea

      Thank you very much Adreamer. ^-^

  • 9 years ago

    by DannyDowns

    Nice... Very very cool

  • 9 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Well thank you guys. :) I was tenacious about putting it in the slang category, but alas, I had to.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kakera

    Thankfully, however, Senyru has great taste which just gave him the ability to throw out 4 nominations this week instead.

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